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:iconcallmematthew:
You've done a lovely job centering yourself in between the hand prints. The red definitely was the best choice. Not that you could have chosen a different color if you were mocking blood.

I happen to like your signature on the wall. It's very inconspicuous. I'm not sure I like whatever that is lying on the floor on the bottom left of the screen.

I happen to love wood floors so that was very pleasing to look at. The fuzzy chair/stool also gives a nice effect. All the blending of white from your shirt to the stool to the wall all convey a nice effect.

Finally your pose is quite inviting and it's as if there is someone standing in the doorway in front of you waiting for you and you just look away. Either that or they are done with you and you want nothing to do with them.
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:icongenabubbles:
wow. you look so delicate. the pose, facial expression and colours just really work. you look so breakable.

those handprints are nice, i like the idea, to me they juxtapose your delicate form. not sure about the lines though them though.. look a bit odd to me. but i still love them.

i also really like the way your hair is almost the same colour as the hand prints.

oh, that round lampy thin is quite distracting, it's a pity about the composition there, oh and so is the change in the wall on the right. but oh well. i still love your beautiful image.

well done!
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:iconsuicidalnatalie22:
wow
moving picture
and lovely tats x

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Dreaming of Clouds and Pink Elephants...

--~~Natalie~~--
:iconpagesixlover:
Very nice, your tattoos are incredible (:

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"We want truths to our own truths."
:iconpappi:
i like the way you have placed yourself slightly ,ore to the right of the frame making it less balanced

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~Dont tell me the sky's the limit, when there are footprints on the moon~
:iconrayaneaj:
i really like this. very different from your usual stuff. the white (especially the white background) gives off a very strange but calm atmosphere, and contrasts beautifully with the blood on the wall. Amazingly done!

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dearest, i feel certain that i am going mad again
:iconrayaneaj:
i really like this. very different from your usual stuff. the white (especially the white background) gives off a very strange but calm atmosphere, and contrasts beautifully with the blood on the wall. Amazingly done!

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dearest, i feel certain that i am going mad again
:iconskippyjr:
That is very good,
Great concept indeed,
I like that.
:)

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aka Tzachi Gvaram

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Aug 9, 2009, 2:14:40 PM

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