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your wounded heart will heal if you don't let it rust

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:iconpocky-sama00:
First off, let me just say this is a truely amazing piece. It really speaks to me. I may be seeing the wrong thing, but either way.. I like what I'm seeing.
Vision
This piece is amazing in showing heartbreak, in multiple stages. Such as the heartbreak itself (top left), all the tears that come from it (bottom right), the healing (top right), and the healed (bottom left). I may be thinking to much.. but I love it none the less.
Originality
Although the idea of heartbreak is used so often it's almost sickening.. But, this piece is original in the way it shows-as I mentioned before-all the stages of heartbreak. And also as I said before, the piece doesn't try and cover up anything bad about heartbreak.
Technique
I really love this piece as the girl shown as beautiful and eye-catching hair. Also, it's interesting how-if my theory of "stages" is correct-how you didn't arrange them in the most eye-pleasing way possible, they're not in order, you have to look, which gives you even more time to appreciate the piece.
Impact
I really love this piece as it shows her in what I called the "healing" stages she has what seems to be flawless skin. Which in a way that I can't quite describe with words, makes my eye linger even longer. Even now, as I'm writing this critique, pretending to be an expert on this piece, I'm still finding myself scrolling up and staring at the picture in a loss of words, hoping it'll tell me something new.
Very well done. :clap:
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:icononeofillusions:
I really love your top right picture. It's very unique! Looks perfect.

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Old Account - ~Jeanutti

:drunk::headache:Got a hangover?
Drink LOTS of:milk:
:iconsaarsez:
love it :meow:!

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Do what you love, and fuck the rest
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:iconstluka:
impressive again and again :kiss:
:icondreamfaery:
:) Brilliant, I love the way tattoos peel.

What awesome make up and eyes you have.

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In the night, she comes, my guardian angel, keeping me safe from harm!
:iconbycavalera:
New Ink?
Really cool! :heart:

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We won't fight to Legalize it, because we're sick of hate and war.
The Nature already did, because the Herb springs from the Earth. :weed:
:iconcat-tm:
great expressions and i like the way colors are so bright :aww:
:iconpipocanancy:
yay pink/magenta hair again ^_^

i love the closeups

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:rzero: No Guts No Glory :rzero:
:iconmiddernachtlopper:
The colour scheme is really nice, and I love the contrast between the vulnenability of the left-top and the right-bottom pics, and the indifference of the another ones. Getting behind it?

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Bienvenidos seáis por la alegría que me dais cuando os vais.

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Camera Data

Canon
Canon EOS 50D
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F/4.0
50 mm
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Aug 2, 2009, 4:34:01 PM

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